I just received this party invite and loved it. It was different enough to stand out in a crowded inbox of goodies.
It reminds me of a campaigning tactic used in the US nominations race. During the height of an online fundraising push one candidate sent out a 2 sentence email to their supporters asking for urgent donations. The email was signed by the candidate personally and lacked any fancy HTML which gave it an intimate vibe.
It was very different from what was considered the ‘best practice’ of the time - a standard 3-5 paragraph email with repetition of a single action ask, HTLM design and text to convince you to do what they wanted.
The 2 sentence email was a huge success because it broke that formula - at least in its strucutre. A few days later lots of other candidates across the country also sent 2 sentence email, which were also successful.
The point im trying to make is that approaching online comms from a fresh angle can help capitvate a stagnating audience in an increasingly saturated space. It’s very basic really - im now going to a party i wouldn’t of otherwise attended.
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date: Thu, Sep 17, 2009 at 1:04 AM
subject: This is a respectful party invitation
mailed-by gmail.comhide details 1:04 AM (9 hours ago)
dear goodly friends,
I apologise heartily for the disrespectfully, perhaps offensively, taciturn nature of the last word sent on the topic of the upcoming celebrations at the house of moblong. There was no poetry in my email of previous, there was no passion. It was a bland and colourless piece of writing, and demonstrated an unfair disregard for the sensitivities of you all, both as people and as potential guests. Despite its brevity, it also ventured into the territory of the inaccessible by ending with an obscure reference to somebody identified only as ‘April’. To explain in brief, April is my dear housemate and I was childishly attempting to send my invitation before she sent hers.*
Let me now rally to assure you all that the inferiority of the original invite should in no way be understood to reflect the quality of the fast-approaching party. I expect it to be a grand shindig, most likely featuring a plethora of dips, much flowing of all manner of liquids, an array of music ranging from the dulcet to the clash, plenty of chatter, both pretentious and absurd, and world record attempts at numbers of persons in one bed. Fire, tree climbing, juggling, roof visits, enforced tea drinking and illegal swimming are also quite likely to make an appearance.
The illustrious house of Moblong is nearly 8 months old. It is home to aforementioned adversary april, mobile munching maria, raging bibliophile emma, tea faced clare, cheese harvesting alain, cat hugging chris and your humble narrator.** Please join us this friday the 18th of september to celebrate the joy of spring, the creation of playpens, the numbing of noses and the era of fruit flies. We would really love to see you all.
Themes are confusing affairs and this theme no less so than any other. If you are inspired by some kind of video clip in your approach to party attire then you are probably on the right track. If you are inspired by music generally you are doing just as well. Pants are optional, but certainly encouraged. Here is a rather nifty video clip which may provide encouragement: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EICkZWEzFGE
Moblong is situated……. . It is reached by walking down… If you are coming from stanmore station you just have to wander down cambridge st, turn right onto merchant at the park, then when merchant ends you cross over stanmore rd to walk down wemyss and turn right onto harrington… yep.
If anyone arrives between 8 and 9, or even before 10, we will love you forever.
Love(forever),
-#*#**
xxxxx
p.s. oh yes. The party is tomorrow.
p.p.s. It is important to note that not only is April aforementioned, she is also wonderful and great.
* I feel it is only fair to report that I was the champion of this contest, beating my commendable opponent by a slim 4 minutes.
** Let it be known that these names were not chose by those they were given to. They are not official titles or approved aliases. They were chosen by myself alone in a spirit of light-hearted frivolity, and I hope that they cause no offense.
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On Wed, Sep 9, 2009 at 9:58 PM, &$*$((#)# wrote:
In case you didn’t already know the moblong is having another party yay!!!
The date of the [party is the 18th of september. yup/ Moblong is #&#&#((. Come from whenever you want. Oh, ok 8
The theme is music clips or something like that. Or just music. Or music pants.
Come come come it will be fun fun fun…
I reckon I beat April yep